It looks like the duration of his Willpower was lengthened from training to PR = 1 per hour instead of PR = 1 per turn.

I get 88 for his Power Points, 74" for ground movement, and 154" for swimming -- but maybe there's a reason these scores are lower than usual.

The boat and crew members are just extra counters for use in the game.

Yeah, polarboy & Bill Kropp are good for checking math.  Or you can use Ypsilanti's spreadsheet.  There are several grammatical errors, too.  I wouldn't sweat it, though.  Your ideas are your strength.

1) The Prejudice says "see below".  Is there further information regarding this weakness, or is it simply pointing the reader to the reaction modifiers?

2) What kind of vessels fire torpedoes?  I'm pretty sure submarines do.  Is there anything else that fires them?

3) Are there stats for the torpedoes anywhere?  Rate of fire, range, accuracy, speed, & damage?

I like the anti-hero concept and the fact that the players won't know quite what to expect from him each time they encounter him.

Display Name wrote on Sep 28^th, 2012 at 2:26am:


That's why when I used to write magazine articles, I had my editor look over any, and everything I wrote.

Display Name wrote on Sep 28^th, 2012 at 2:26am:


It's a reference to his reaction mods.

Display Name wrote on Sep 28^th, 2012 at 2:26am:


Any sea vessel  or aircraft, that's been properly equipped can fire them. They've been mounted on submarines, ships, boats, helicopters, and fixed wing aircraft.

Display Name wrote on Sep 28^th, 2012 at 2:26am:


Since so many people have asked for stats, I'll go back through the various modules/supplements and see if some have already been published. If not, I'll see about whipping up some rules for them.

Display Name wrote on Sep 28^th, 2012 at 2:26am:


I'll see about whipping up some plot seeds for him as an extra added bonus.

Good Stuff Dom.. nice work!

Bill Kropp wrote on Aug 1^st, 2012 at 12:59am:


Yes the stories are good, I just have issues with the style of art (i.e. I want my humans to look like real humans No Big Eyes small mouth. Do you guys know any people who look like that?)

dsumner wrote on Sep 28^th, 2012 at 2:05pm:


True very true but I still prefer the more human look. I have had this discussion with friends for years. For example I love Alex Ross's style of work most of my comic book friends don't

I like Dee's early stuff.  Haven't seen any recent stuff (the D&D stuff doesn't count).

dsumner wrote on Sep 27^th, 2012 at 11:53pm:


Mathematical issues aside, and hey, they really are secondary to a well-realized character, I think it is a great contribution Dom. 

I can pretty much guarantee that Sea Devil will show up in my own campaign as soon as I get to it.

Kudos to all involved: Dom for writing and concept; Joe Singleton for realizing that concept; and James Bishop for putting these packages together with a nice finish and added value materials in the form of counters that can be used in a variety of scenarios/encounters.

Okay, I shot James a list of corrections to Sea Devil. I'm working up some Torpedo stats, and at least to Plot Seeds, which I'll post here, within the next few days.

As requested, here's some Torpedo stats.

Torpedo: +5 to hit, 2d20 damage, blast radius: 5" (8" in water), with a maximum range in water of 500".

Why does the torpedo have an increased blast radius in water?

Display Name wrote on Sep 30^th, 2012 at 11:30pm:


To simulate explosives underwater and pressure waves. In my game we give a 50% bump to the radius of torpedoes and similar explosives thanks to pressure waves. It's not as good as a sonic attack (which get double the range that it would on the surface), but it's still an improvement. It's also good for fishing...

(That said, if you don't like the rule, disregard it.)

Ramble

Ramble wrote on Oct 2^nd, 2012 at 2:08am:

I'm just getting clarification.  I didn't realize an underwater concussion was stronger/further.

Thunderbolt wrote on Oct 2^nd, 2012 at 8:24am:


Cool!  When will we see it?

Thunderbolt wrote on Oct 2^nd, 2012 at 11:02am:


Atlantis makes an appearance in the upcoming Final Fight with the Furies which is now going through the final production stages (maps and editing).
Danger in the Depths covers undersea kingdoms pretty well...
but an undersea disaster could be really fun.
I also would love to see your stuff.

As always, he looks amazing! 

AlabasterKnight wrote on Oct 2^nd, 2012 at 2:55pm:


Hmmm.. I think I will want to purchase this "Danger in the Depths" and read it closely before I write anything.  I don't want to contradict ...and I could use some elements of that adventure in mine.  I like a cohesive Universe.